I know you requested critique on this, but I'm not very good at in-depth comments. Will you be satisfied with a fav and the words "DO WANT"? ...I know the reaction to this copout will be something along the lines of
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No 9000 computer has ever made a mistake or distorted information. We are, for every practical sense of the words, foolproof and incapable of error.
Well... for more of an in-depth critique, I'd like to point out the spacing for the letters. "LIFE" is pretty good, but "COFFEE" is off. It's sitting a bit too far to the right.
A trick my dad taught me for doing letter spacing correctly is to draw everything out first. Think about making half-circles in something like this. Make a block outline for each of the letters in each of the words, then fill in the blocks with the letters. Since you've already set up where the characters should be, everything will be spaced correctly and the wrap will be placed perfectly.
Actually that's exactly what I did and I wound up being off-center anyway, but I was too lazy to fix it. XD;
Also in the future can you not reply to your own comments? I don't get an alert for those, and I wouldn't have noticed this comment had you not told me about it in the chat.
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"I sought the LORD, and He heard me, and delivered me from all my fears." Psalm 34:4
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No matter how many times I see TAM-E dressing up I cant help but think about how adorable it is XD.
not sure what to make of this "life coffee" thing though, Is it something I missed from WERP Chat?
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In soviet axiom, you dont give the plant to Auto, Auto gives the plant to YOU!
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"I sought the LORD, and He heard me, and delivered me from all my fears."
Psalm 34:4
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In soviet axiom, you dont give the plant to Auto, Auto gives the plant to YOU!
...I know the reaction to this copout will be something along the lines of
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No 9000 computer has ever made a mistake or distorted information. We are, for every practical sense of the words, foolproof and incapable of error.
P.S. Nighty's mine. <3
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"I sought the LORD, and He heard me, and delivered me from all my fears."
Psalm 34:4
Trying to imagine inept but sincere TAM-E as a super hero is just hilarious. xD
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~Tanstaafl
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"I sought the LORD, and He heard me, and delivered me from all my fears."
Psalm 34:4
A trick my dad taught me for doing letter spacing correctly is to draw everything out first. Think about making half-circles in something like this. Make a block outline for each of the letters in each of the words, then fill in the blocks with the letters. Since you've already set up where the characters should be, everything will be spaced correctly and the wrap will be placed perfectly.
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~Tanstaafl
Also in the future can you not reply to your own comments? I don't get an alert for those, and I wouldn't have noticed this comment had you not told me about it in the chat.
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"I sought the LORD, and He heard me, and delivered me from all my fears."
Psalm 34:4
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